I can see that 'reap' and 'deep,' 'prayers' and 'bears,' ... do rhyme, and so I suppose it is a splendid effort, but if you had written it in plain prose, I could have understood it a great deal better and read it a great deal more easily.
I can see that 'reap' and 'deep,' 'prayers' and 'bears,' ... do rhyme, and so I suppose it is a splendid effort, but if you had written it in plain prose, I could have understood it a great deal better and read it a great deal more easily.
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